Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconregidar: More from regidar


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
July 2, 2012
File Size
3.0 KB
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
91
Favourites
2 (who?)
Comments
42
×
Nirvana carefully walked over the heated red stones of Hell.

His hooves made a soft crunching noise as they clopped over the red stones.

Approaching a pool of blood, he saw a mare crying over the pool.

"Are you alright?"

Turning around, he saw a face he hadn't in a while.

"Nightmare Dream? Is that-"

Nightmare's face contorted into a grotesque grimace.

"It's me, your only friend, and the one you loved. But why didn't you save me?"

Nirvana stumbled back.

"I'm sorry! I warned you not to go into my dreams!"

The face had almost completely melted off by now, and her skin was beginning to bubble.

"You knew I was tempted to see what was in your head! You should have acted more on this! My death was all your fault!"

Nirvana backed over a ledge.

"AAAAHH!"

Down, falling, forever into a pit of darkness.

***

"Nirvana...Nirvana..."

Blinking, Nirvana looked over at the person standing over him.

It was in fact a person, a human if he recalled Lyra Heartstring's lectures correctly.

"Damn it, Nirvana, why didn't you kill her?"

"I'm sorry, when someone dies, I expect them to stay dead! Also, who are you?"

The human standing over him had blonde hair, was wearing a green striped dress shirt and underneath that a shirt which said Nirvana's name on it and bore his cutie mark.

"You have a shirt of me?"

"Um, no. They're a band. And if I had one of you, I would burn it, because you are that much of a dumbass."

"I don't see how that would add up, but ok..."

The human walked over to a cabinet, and Nirvana got a better look around.

He was in a small house, a one room hovel really, consistent of a bench with tools on it, a cauldron, a toilet with a curtain around it, a sink, a brewing stand, some shelves, a furnace, and a jukebox.

The human pulled out a green potion, and uncorked it.

"Here, drink this."

He gave it to Nirvana. Nirvana gulped it down for about five seconds and then nearly threw up.

"What the hell is that?"

"It's rat bile."

Nirvana did throw up this time. Fortunately, he made it to the toilet in time.

When he was finished, he gave the human a stair of loathing.

"Why did you do that?"

The human laughed. "I wanted to see if you were stupid enough to drink it. I'm Elijah by the way."

Nirvana walked around.

"Hey, Big Mac, you get some mushrooms to use in the stew from outside?"

Nirvana stopped dead in his tracks.

"Eeyup!"

Big Mac walked in and stopped in his tracks when he saw Nirvana. Nirvana turned to run, but Big Mac snorted in anger, and charged Nirvana down, tackling him, and thrusting his hooves to Nirvana's throat.
Due to popular demand (A.K.A nagging) I have finished chapter 8 of death and dying.

YAH HAPPY NOW SEAN? YAH HAPPY?!

Anyways, enjoy.

In this chapter, nirvana faces some demons, and meets up with an old friend.
Add a Comment:
 
:iconwildeye99:
wildeye99 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Student General Artist
awesome!
Reply
:iconregidar:
regidar Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! any fave parts?
Reply
:iconwildeye99:
wildeye99 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
the part when it hints at what goes in nirvana's head... much like mine, only a lot less... how do you say?... um, pleasant.
Reply
:iconregidar:
regidar Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Writer
Lol, yeah, what goes on inside you head probably won't kill anyone.

Probably.
Reply
:iconwildeye99:
wildeye99 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh so you think I need an extra torture chamber?
Reply
:iconregidar:
regidar Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Writer
yes, you do.

Probably.
Reply
:iconwildeye99:
wildeye99 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconmusicnoteplz: if e'er I spied a singing bird, I'd wring it's neck before its heard!:iconmusicnoteplz:
Reply
:iconregidar:
regidar Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Writer
:icontychoplz: that's the scariest fucking thing I have ever heard.
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconghostwriter95:
GhostWriter95 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Sweet lord! Rat bile potions eh? Seems legit.

Another excellent chapter! You're going to ask for a favorite part, so here it is.

The human standing over him had blonde hair, was wearing a green striped dress shirt and underneath that a shirt which said Nirvana's name on it and bore his cutie mark.

"You have a shirt of me?"

"Um, no. They're a band. And if I had one of you, I would burn it, because you are that much of a dumbass."
Reply
:iconregidar:
regidar Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Student Writer
Lol, I think it's safe to assume that you and :icongreenrob: are my biggest fans!

I'm glad you liked this chapter, I added some humor into it.

And it's true, nirvana the pony is quite a dumbass.
Reply
Add a Comment: